good idea and execution, however the line work in some areas could be cleaner and less blurry/soft so you have a mix of hard and soft areas for more appeal and diversity. Line weight and values could certainly be implemented to give it a better graphical read and 3D form.
the tentacles and the spine like structure on the inner is a nice touch, much more could be improved upon but otherwise a creative design.
the foreshortening on the leg can be improved but other than that i don't see anything that needs to be brought up
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