I am going to be honest and realistic here:
-the landscapes lack depth and the shading isn't consistent, nothing fits in
-the flame looks buggy, unnatural
-lack of a clear dialogue, i cannot understand anything and what the story is supposed to be, infact i don't see much of a story going on.
-the scene composition is not dramatic/interesting
-i don't see much decent animation for the characters but rather the skewing of images and scenes fading in and out(the cyborg is just floating and not even doing so naturally).
-the only thing i liked was the dramatic music.
there are still much things to improve on and those few things i pointed out explains why i gave you 1/2 a star.
good idea and execution, however the line work in some areas could be cleaner and less blurry/soft so you have a mix of hard and soft areas for more appeal and diversity. Line weight and values could certainly be implemented to give it a better graphical read and 3D form.
the tentacles and the spine like structure on the inner is a nice touch, much more could be improved upon but otherwise a creative design.
the foreshortening on the leg can be improved but other than that i don't see anything that needs to be brought up
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